Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. I am in Year 5 and my teacher is Mr Gray. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Monday, 18 May 2020
awsome Duffy books
I think that that beast boy wants to be smart and he
cast a spell on himself, but it does not work. He fells
the same but his frends start acting silly.
Thank you for giving us thes books we really appreciate it.
would you like to get Duffy books
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Nice layout Rico. I like the big pics and organised text. You have given a thoughtful prediction. Next time you could track down the WALT so we know what you are learning. I would love to get these Duffy books! What would you do next for the Ninja kid character if you were the author
ReplyDeleteHi mr grey its Rico. I woul probaly add a bad spongbob then ninja kid would save the world and yous his powers to make him a good spongbob. thankes.
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