WALT Record arguments and back them up with evidence. Mr Gray got us the picture. what would you rather be?
Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. I am in Year 5 and my teacher is Mr Gray. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Wednesday, 22 July 2020
3 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
hi Rico it Bryce from New Brighton Catholic School i would be an eagele because it would be cool and i can fly.
ReplyDeleteHi Rico,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Scarlett from New Brighton Catholic school.
I like your post on your persuasive argument.
I would rather be an Eagle to.
It would be fun to fly.
Maybe next time check your spelling.
Good job though.
Hello Rico.
ReplyDeleteI really like you arguments and your strong bold words.
Did you screen shot this? Maybe next time inbed it and change your spelling.
-Alfred