Hello,
This is my first summer learning journey task.
I hope you like it. One of my favourite things to do is surf.
My lyrics are about surfing across the face of the wave and going really fast.
Thursday 17 December 2020
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1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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Kia Ora Rico,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Maddison, I am a Year 6 in Hauraki at Waikowhai Primary. I am also doing the Summer Learning Journey.
Well done on completing your first activity.
I really enjoyed reading your lyrics about surfing. I haven't been surfing before. I think it might scare me a bit, if its as you described it. Fast!!!
How long have you been surfing for?
Look forward to seeing more of your Summer Learning Journey.
Maddison
Hi Maddison,
DeleteI really think you should try surfing.
I have been surfing for 3 years.
Thanks for the wonderful comment.
Rico.
Kia ora RIco
ReplyDeleteGood to see you get started on your Summer Learning Journey. Nice rhyming pattern! I have only surfed when we have gone down as a school, and by surf I mean fallen off. It was great fun though. It would be cool to see some pictures or video of you catching a wave. What would we need to think about if we were to go down as a class next year?
Hi Nick.
DeleteIt would be very cool to go as a class but we would need some parent helpers if it does happen.
Thanks for the comment.#
Rico.
ReplyDeleteHey Rico,
I’m Daniel from the SLJ Blog commenting team. I’m looking forward to seeing all your amazing blog posts and I hope you’re enjoying your summer.
I love the pace and rhythm of your chorus. It sounds like you would again and again faster and faster like the waves coming at you while surfing faster and faster. That’s a pretty cool subject for your song and the accompanying image is perfect.
Nice work Rico,
See you later in the comments.
Daniel
Hi Daniel,
Deletethank you for your amazing comment I appreciate your feed back.
Rico.
I agree, who would be a surfing expert who could help us? We could even do a small group with you as the expert and a couple of parents. We have done this in the past as an elective where a dad took down 3 surfing kids with experience every week in the summer. The kids loved it!
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