Tuesday 7 September 2021

Giraffe

 Walt use adjectives.

I really liked this activity because we got to write our own story about a giraffe and also really liked this activity because I got it done pretty fast. Heres some of my work.

The giraffe was eating until a whole pack of lions sneaked up and pounced but the lion missed. The chase is on.


They were weaving through bushes and dodging the long grass. Then the giraffe found a  perfect tree to climb up so the lions couldn't get up. But it was too late the lions had already got the giraffe. The End. 


Have you ever seen a giraffe

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1 comment:

  1. Sarah8 September 2021 at 09:39

    Hi Rico, well done on your Giraffe story, unfortunately it has gone off the page and I can't read it all, do you think you can fix this? I can see you have used adjectives, ka pai Rico.
    Sarah

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